Spiral [vanessa]
Creation...
Man, woman
Enjoying life together
Hearts beating as one
Pure
Exposure...
Raw, vulnerable
Soul peels inward
Engulfed in quick sand
Shame
Naked...
Not ashamed
Grace being received
Tears mingled with beauty
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I love the comparison of "exposure" versus "naked" between the last two stanzas. They are two similar things, but here the circumstance makes them completely different. "Shame / Naked.../ Not ashamed" Great transition.
ReplyDeleteI also like the idea of "Naked.../not ashamed" as preceding the reception of grace. The whole poem is such a great progression from line to line, each adding to the last. The middle stanza adds the perfect amount of tension.
Good job!